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Plot Ideas?
« Thread Started on Jul 30, 2007, 6:57pm »

Here my member can post ideas for the site-plot, not that I'm not thinking of one XD

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #1 on Jul 30, 2007, 6:58pm »

How about Shadowclan tries to take over forest but Riverclan hears of it and starts a secret war with Shadowclan. Windclan finds out and thinks Riverclan is trying to take over the forest, and teams up with Shadowclan to take down Riverclan, Riverclan cats get injured and ask Thunderclan for help while explaining Shadowclan's plot and how they are tricking Windclan so Thunderclan battles against Shadowclan and Windclan with the healed part of Riverclan and then the battle ends up each clan for themselves. Ofcourse it won't happen exactly like that, but like it?

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #2 on Jul 30, 2007, 7:19pm »

I like that. And not because I lead ShadowClan, but it is a good plot line thingy mabob XD

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #3 on Aug 2, 2007, 11:19am »

I have one that might do well:

I come before you with a plot that I have come up with. FlashStar had a look at it, she think's it's good!

It's called: 'Rise of DarkClan'

Theme tune: 'What I've Done' By Linkin Park.

If you check Diagon's bio then you'll notice a small bit about DarkClan, go there for more info on this evil clan!

Diagon is a cat that was the daughter of the cat version of Satan (DarkStar). She wishes to bring him back from his destoyed belief and eradicate belief in StarClan. Soon after resting in the treecut place she begin to recruit rogues and loners who wish to join her.

Once she has enough cats, she uses a ritual to bring back DarkStar from the non-belief place. he summons his undead troops to attack the four clans. In doing this, the survivours gather at the fourtrees (enter Rapideagle). Rapideagle reveals his past to the clans, and tells them that the only way to stop DarkStar is to stop belief in him for good.

He tells them that there is a place far away from the forest (and the mountains of the tribes.) known as 'The Gates of StarClan' (Where you tie in with this mess! ). He knows where the place is, and it's a mini northern lights thingie, Rapideagle tells the cats to choose four warriors to go with him to The Gates of StarClan' to ask you to stop DarkStar's powers and belief FOREVER!

In the meantime the clans must find a place that they can hide in (The farm) until StarClan deals with Diagon, DarkStar, and this whole mess!

FIN.

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #4 on Aug 2, 2007, 11:42am »

I like that. And, just to let you know, I think both are very good. But we cannot have a plot yet. Griffenstar wants us to wait a while for new members, and then she will pick out the plot.

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #5 on Aug 2, 2007, 12:15pm »

1. I was in the middle of hearin What I've Done when I started reading. What a coincidence.
2.That would be pretty good combined with mine so after the ultra-clan battle, things get worse.
3.It is almost school time so lots of peaople won't be as active(maybe) Same with mine ;_;.
4. If we do go with that, I choose Brambleclaw! Lol.

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #6 on Aug 2, 2007, 12:55pm »

I call Autumnstar! And Silentsong! Lol.

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #7 on Aug 2, 2007, 2:18pm »

Ah, but we can still have ideas ^.^

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #8 on Aug 3, 2007, 5:47pm »

Of course of course we can! Not saying that! We still need lots and lots of ideas!

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #9 on Aug 3, 2007, 6:33pm »

This is completely crazy but it might work ^.^

Title: +The Cross-Eyed Moose+

Plot: +A cross-eyed moose rages through the forest, no cat can stop it. One day it comes back, and attacks during a Gathering. The cats fight back bravely, but the moose is too strong and weeds through them without a problem. Four days later, a two-leg runs into the forest, and all clan leaders order their cats to stay in their dens, the two-leg brought a thing that makes a loud sound when it goes off. The next day, they hear the loud sound and a moose's cry, and they find the moose, dead by the river. The cat's rejoice, but that isn't the end. An abnoxious RiverCan warrior decides to tell the clans that he killed it single-handedly. The clans don't believe him and he is shunned. He comes back, a rogue, and plans to take over the clans for calling him a liar. ThunderClan and RiverClan welcome him back, but WindClan and ShadowClan believe he should not be accepted back into the clans. One night, a ShadowClan and a WindClan warrior sneek in and kill the tom and ThunderClan and RiverClan and ShadowClan and WindClan fight, but it ends in peace when StarClan gets angry and send a raging fire through the forest.+

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #10 on Aug 3, 2007, 7:36pm »

Anyway, how about something like a twoleg invasion. Twoleg's arrive and would camp out around the clans so the clans would have to be more secretive. THen more arrive and soon peaople are camping out and the a forst fire starts and the cats try to escape but it is to hard because the twolegs are scattering around.

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #11 on Aug 3, 2007, 8:15pm »

Hmmm, but that would be to hard.

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #12 on Aug 6, 2007, 1:33pm »

Well, I'm not sure how to put this, but even though my 'Rise of DarkClan' plot is complex, maybe combined with +The Cross-Eyed Moose+ and the ShadowClan plot would perhaps be good. Just a thought.

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #13 on Aug 6, 2007, 4:43pm »

Yeah. I like that. That tis a good idea Rapideagle. ^.A *Kabionk*

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Re: Plot Ideas?
« Reply #14 on Aug 8, 2007, 6:51pm »

I wrote a story that sorta has a plot in it. Maybe it will work.

The only sound in the forest was the soft crunching of leaves. A calico she-cat carefully made her way through the blanket of light mist. Her bright green eyes flickered with worry as she walked along. She had been here before… She hoped that the terrible words that had come to her would not repeat themselves. “Ah, Leafpelt. It is nice to see you again.” A voice said. It echoed through the forest, but at a level that would not be heard very far away. Something that had not appeared in her other dreams came. A silver tom slowly faded through the air. His pelt was long and striped with a slightly darker grey. It was as soft as silk and flowed in luscious waves. “You have ignored our words yet again.” He said seriously, his serious blue eyes flashing with annoyance and still they were understanding eyes. His voice was calm and steady even though he was not completely. Leafpelt’s eyes flickered anxiously but still she said nothing.

“Dark times will come but the sun will rise.

Dawn, Midnight, Evening and Sun will unite.

Dark will come back, to destroy the times.

The earth will shake and blood will fall from the sky.

Dark will rule.

Dawn, sun, evening, and midnight will hold the power of Starclan at their paws.”

Hundreds of cats faded slowly into view; their voices combining and harmonizing the words. She had heard this dreaded prophecy before but never with the cats there. She had merely walking in the forest when the voice boomed out that very prophecy. She had no idea what it meant. “Please tell me more.” Leafpelt said with a small tremor in her voice. She was really getting scared now. Every time she had tried to tell Gingerstar, the leader of her clan, ThunderClan, or Blackstorm, the ThunderClan medicine cat, something had stopped her. It was a terrible thing. “This is your last warning…” All of the cats said, fading away with the dream…

Leafpelt awoke with a shiver. Dark will rule…? She thought. It sounded so much like the prophecy of BloodClan so many seasons ago… But here she was warm and safe in the nursery expecting kits. Her mate was Crowfeather, a direct descendant from the Crowfeather that went on the journey long before her great-great-great grandmother was born. The Crowfeather now had just recently joined ThunderClan. When he was in WindClan they had met each other constantly, but now they had nothing to hide. She slowly got up, her belly full of kits pulling her down. She stretched and yawned widely.
She slowly made her way out to the camp.

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